VERSION 1.0.0.2 CHANGELOG
Added individual conversation threads to each player to update them in secret when secrets need be kept. :emoji_eye:
Added link to the IC in first post.
Updated section 4 to include completed main objectives and subplots.
Discord has current objectives/subplots pinned...
VERSION 1.0.0.1 CHANGELOG
Created list of accepted characters. (With help from @Ouverture )
Tweaked a handful of minor items in the main OOC thread.
Added Battle Maps. (To be shown in the IC later.)
Added systems for Diplomacy and Battle checks. (To be added to the main OOC later.)
IC going...
PART 4: Information Kiosk
Here is where you will find the information you need to build your character, as well as immerse yourself in the universe.
You will find Ancestry Choices here, and Specialty Choices here. Choose these wisely, as they will heavily shape the course of your character’s...
Status: Full.
Slots: 9/8 Taken.
Ver: 1.0.0.2
Other Threads?
Interest Check Here.
In Character Here.
PART 1: THE PREMISE
In the year 2380, the Earth was abandoned. Her ecosystem had been too far ravaged to remain suitable for human life.
Shortly thereafter, humanity found its new...
So, plot twist: Character creation isn't done yet.
As a part of Storyboarding, now is the part where I (as the "Lead Writer") basically just ask all of you point blank what ideas you want to contribute to the story, or what you would like to set up/achieve for your characters. Aka: Long term...
So, I decided that if Christmas music can come early, so can my approval list.
THESE CHARACTERS ARE APPROVED FOR LEGEND OF RENALTA'S BEGINNING
Sisera De Platine ( @slade )
Alice Emeline Moineau ( @LimeyPanda ) (If you would prefer, you can play Rahim instead.)
Aeri ( @Becca ) (If you would...
Part 2 of 2.
#1 (Error): Magic concept too broad, please narrow. (Talked to you about this on Discord, no detail needed.)
#2 (Suggestion): Be careful around the weakness of social ineptitude. It can cut off a lot of interactions.
Final Recommendation: Work on the magic concept. It's too...
Part 1 of 2.
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Good! :p
Yeah, this works fine. I mulled it heavily with you over voice chat on that spell list, but I'll let it pass. :p
So, I figured now was a good time to explain how storyboarding works. (Because, I mean, I got the time, right? :p)
Visual Guide.
Storyboarding refers to a process in collective writing wherein a group of writers (typically led by a lead writer) plan out a series of events to occur within a set...
Part 2 of 3.
#1 (Suggestion): Werewolf form has no weight, unless he weighs the same in that form as he does in his human form.
Not a whole lot else to change here. This would grow over play.
Referring to line: "A month after hearing the rumor he decided it was time that he brought great...
Reviews Episode 3: Try Harder!
Part 1 of 3.
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Why is magic concept blank? You do still need one.
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So, instead of reviewing character sheets, I worked on two things: Adding the Pre-Cataclysm history, and NPC Opinions for fun. Wheee~
PRE-CATACLYSM
The Timeline sheet now has the Pre-Cataclysm history. Neato, eh'? I'll add it below in a spoiler as well so you can read it on STC if you prefer...
Reminder: If you don't tell me that you've updated your sheets, I won't bother reviewing them again. So, y'know, communicate this with posts in the OOC. :emoji_clipboard:
Review #2: Electric Boogaloo.
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#3...
Part 4 of 4
... Well, son of a gun. Nothing really wrong here. Huh. Oh well. :p Just means you're gonna have a good time.
#1 (Error): Magic is quite literally required to make magical artifacts, so, some of your character's family probably were mages. :p
Referring to line: "With this being...
Part 3 of 4
Ah, the disney princess. I was wondering when you'd show up.
#1 (Error): Paragraph spacing!!! PARAGRAPH SPACING!!!
#2 (Suggestion): Add a height and weight for this character as a point of comparison for others.
Referring to line: "Her father, true to the nature of elves...
Part 2 of 4
#1 (Error): In the "glitter gloves" entry under equipment, it states "may or may not help." It either does, or doesn't, please don't leave that up in the air. :p Making plans is more difficult with uncertainty.
Referring to line: "Only in the last year or two has she been able to...
This post is being split into multiple parts. This is Part 1 of 4.
Alright folks, here is how reviews will work.
#1: I'm splitting points made into three categories: Error, Suggestion, and Informational. Errors need to be fixed in order for the sheet to become approvable. Suggestions are...
STATUS: In the midst of Chapter 1, two open slots. 10/12 Slots.
Welcome to Legend of Renalta! Here’s the index!
“Chapter 1” is the plot of the story. “Chapter 2” is the Character Sheet. “Chapter 3” is the Rules section. “Chapter 4” is the “lists” area, where active characters and what not are...
Another IC post is up! Company's coming, and things are starting to get a little more interesting.
For those in Kouri's Group: Yes, I am aware that this round, I did not give you a whole lot to work with. That's mainly so Kasienka and Hanus can (appropriately) remain ahead of the group, rather...
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