Three Moons (poem)

Nika at Dawn

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The first moon is silver.
The second is gold.
The third moon is reflections and tints and trying to see.

The first moon is truth.
The second is trust.
The third moon is lies and regrets and remembered promises gone wrong.

The first moon is changing.
The second is caring.
The third moon is heartbreak and healing and hope beyond divides.

The first moon is safety.
The second is yearning.
The third moon is flight and fleeing and falling back up again.

The first moon is haunting.
The second is eternal.
The third moon is memories and forgetting and trinkets on dusty shelves.

intellectual property of me (I saw someone copyright their poem, I don't know if I'm supposed to do that or not)
 
I feel like you are trying to say that the poem explores the symbolism of three moons, each representing different aspects of life and emotions. The first moon represents truth, the second represents trust, and the third moon embodies themes of deception, regret, and broken promises. These moons also symbolize change, caring, heartbreak, healing, safety, yearning, flight, and memories. The poem reflects on the complexities of human experiences and emotions, moving from positive qualities to more challenging ones, ultimately ending with the idea of memories and the passage of time. The mention of copyright at the end suggests the poet's intent to protect their work. I like it.
 
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