Recent content by Rainbow Rose

Greetings! Name's Rainbow, how ya doing? I'm looking for a roleplay partner for a roleplay based in the StarFox universe. Now, I typically try to write my responses as if they were paragraphs in a book, and I would appreciate if you did the same. Granted, I do understand that sometimes all a...

Greetings and salutations! I've had this idea for a roleplay sitting in my head for a long while now, and it is...rather strange. The roleplay I have in mind is a universe crossover of StarFox and...Higurashi No Naku Koro Ni (When They Cry). See? Strange. Anyhoo, the setup is as follows: If...

Okay, so this may be a little...daunting, considering how large SBURB and the scale of Homestuck as a whole is, but if anyone is interested in having a little run through SBURB, here's what I had in mind. (Please note that I have read up to Cascade, or the end of Act 5. I know nothing about the...

For the record, I suck at beginning stories, but this one is one of the worst for me. I want to start the story off with a serene and laid-back tone. A young man named Zephyr is sitting in his favorite apple tree. He eats an apple or two then jumps down, only to find that a girl his age is...

A character of mine has a backstory that involves his parents being involved with the black market. Most of his family members were (and still are) arms dealers, while others are hitmen. Problem is, I'm not 100% sure how to go about this backstory. The character, Lewis, is against his family's...

Something I'm having trouble with is describing the voice of a character in my book. Normally, it doesn't matter what their voice sounds like unless it's supposed to be annoying or something, but this is different. The protagonist, Lucas, is with a boy named Satoshi. They are both 17, and...

The personalities of the characters are as follows: Lucas is the dominant, fun-loving guy with a caring side. He can be a bit aggressive and careless. As for Satoshi, he's a reserved, shy, and silent type. He has a very traumatic past that caused him to spend most of his life in complete...

It's perfect, thank you! I couldn't think of what the characters could say, but your examples help a lot!

That helps so much, thank you! If you don't mind me asking, what are some good euphemisms to use?

In my romance novel I'm writing, the two main characters end up in a homosexual relationship. Of course, this already brings up issues and obstacles for them to overcome, but the biggest one for Satoshi, an anti-social, extremely shy boy, is his past. And his body constantly reminds him. In the...

This actually helps a huge deal! :emoji_grinning: Cutting to black might be my best option, since the creation is changed after the event, and becomes more dangerous and unstable. As for the new creation, named Vizyx, he now has to deal with having a son who is stronger than him, more dangerous...

That is true, and I do have plenty of story left to write to think about it. Even so, if I do decide to do this scene, I'd rather do it tactfully instead of making the scene almost glanced over, too extreme, or even offensive. I know someone is always going to be offended with this kind of...

That makes sense. Thanks! As for why he does this, Dr. Syndrome thrives on being the cause of others' suffering. The longer the process takes, the better. In other words, he's a sadist.

That's not exactly what I had in mind, but that advice helps with any of the choices I could go with. What I had in mind was rape, which brought up the question of "Is this going to be offensive?" Granted, it'd still be disturbing, which is what I'm going for, but like I said, I don't want the...

You're not being a wet blanket, don't worry. Dr. Syndrome needs to fertilize the egg naturally, or the resulting creation will be unstable. And yes, concerning the writing portion, that is a big help!