Open [Science Fiction] [Star Wars] Viknid's Adventures - Searching For Partners

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You can find the character in this thread: https://www.storytellerscircle.com/threads/characters.9571/#post-181322 It's high up.

In short, Viknid is a young Jedi Knight, who constantly flirts with the Dark Side of the Force, yet does nothing bad. He claims all that is part of his communication with the Force. Where will all this friendship take him? Will he be a hero? Will he be the end of it all?

The RP is intended to start off as a single thread. I have the opening crawl and even the starter ready, but I didn't understand if I should place them in this thread or not. As I mentioned earlier, this is my first ever time role-playing in a forum and not using Chatango, so please excuse if I make noobish mistakes.

I am also considering 1×1 roleplays on this topic and very highly. If I'm allowed to, I'd like to post this thread in the 1×1 section as well, but I'd like to keep my options open for a group too. Thus I put the Open prefix.

I would only also add a few things:
  • Generally I play in paragraph or semi-para. Instead of lines I prefer counting words, so I could say about 100-150 words per post is a good minimum to start. I even sometimes place posts with over 300 words. It can be discussable, but I wouldn't like single sentences per post.
  • If there is going to be romance, I'd like my character's romantic partner to be female. Preferrably played by a female role-player, because... I've had struggles in the past.
  • If it's going to be a group RP, please let's take turns strictly. I don't want our posts to intersect each other's actions.
  • The timeline I would like to place this RP at is around 3500 BBY. This is the time Viknid is designed to thrive in and supposedly become Hero Of The Republic.
Again, this is my ask for the mods, I'll try not to ask them too many times, but I never saw in the rules if it's allowed to place the same thread in different forums. I've seen people banned from other forum sites for such things.
 
As much as I’d love to scratch my Star Wars itch, there are a few inconsistencies in your character sheet that are turning me off it.
 
As much as I’d love to scratch my Star Wars itch, there are a few inconsistencies in your character sheet that are turning me off it.


What do you mean by "inconsistencies"? I may fix them at any moment. Are you sure you read his sheet in particular?
 
How can he be a consular, and have mastered all seven forms by only 18?
They wouldn’t have knighted him at 15, especially if they were concerned about him. The typical age for knighthood being 22-26, with Anakin being an outlier at 19.
 
I surely should fix the ages, because I didn't know that fact. I know Revan and the Barsen'Thor (consular from SW The Old Republic) got knighted quite early, but I don't know what ages they may have been at. I think the latter also was knighted in their teens. But I intend to start him at age of 23. I thought they knight them at 18 by default. Still, I would tell how it happened and maybe I should add it to the backstory, now that I have thought it out a bit better. I intended that he or his master tells the story in the RP, but maybe it's not good.

I must also change that he actually can just fight in them and EVENTUALLY the goal is that he masters the 7 forms during the RP. I realize that mistake I have made.

Still, please understand I'm a newbie. I know many things should be fixed, so please tell me these all the time. I've always wanted to do something like this and I never have. Like Socrates said, I know that I know nothing. Not that this will get me an RP at any moment...
 
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Name: Saadro Vatriph
Age: 47
Species: Human

Occupation: Smuggler, Arms Dealer, Vigilante

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A standard hilt lightsaber. The power crystal was taken from the caves on Illum, with a barab ingot as a focusing crystal. It has a light blue blade that sometimes crackles like fire.
This is the Saber he most often uses, when pretending to be a Jedi
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His first lightsaber, it has been rebuilt several times. The current body is made from Beskar stolen from Mandalor, during his tenure as a Sith Warrior. This lightsaber is unique in that it uses a red Krayt dragon pearl and a lava crystal as focusing crystals, while the main power crystal is a Blackwing Crystal. The resulting Saber is quite powerful, but rather iconic. Saadro often leaves it locked up on his ship since he is trying to remain undetected by the
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The SparrowHawk is Saadro’s current ship. It is a modified cargo shuttle that is built to slip through blockades and checkpoints. While not that big, Saadro is using it to regain the Bar Maid. His previous ship. The Pretty Barmaid.
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History: Saadro was born on the planet Dromund Kaas. His force sensitivity was discovered early, and he was taken from his family to start his training on Korriban at the Sith Academy.
He served the Sith Empire until he was 29, when he decided he wanted to start being good. He has since made a living trading along the Daragon Trail, and venturing through the outer rim, pretending to be a Jedi.
 
Hey-o, you should be good to make a post in 1x1 too.
 
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I meant the same thread in the 1x1 section. If this is allowed, I'd be glad to do so.

I mean, I can create other stories with him. I check for other people and they can still join. But I will do what has to be done. No worries.
 
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