Ragenaut
Don't get between me and my munchies
Coming here from reading this. http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/AudienceAlienatingPremise
I believe I have a fairly appealing premise, but an extremely unappealing protagonist. In my story, called "The Bloodlands", criminals in a Super-Max prison find themselves going between their lives in prison, and into a nightmarish, violent world filled with sadistic killers and horrid abominations. I think this part will be just fine.
The issue comes with the protagonist, an 18 year old high schooler who found his way in prison after hunting down all his bullies and those he thought didn't help him or betrayed him, and gun them down. The opening chapter is dedicated to this shooting, and it only ends after an officer shoots him in his side, which knocks him down and out, with the pain rendering him unconscious.
So yeah, a teenaged school shooter, how much more sympathetic can ya get! Seriously though, do you think this would make a good main character, given the setting?
I believe I have a fairly appealing premise, but an extremely unappealing protagonist. In my story, called "The Bloodlands", criminals in a Super-Max prison find themselves going between their lives in prison, and into a nightmarish, violent world filled with sadistic killers and horrid abominations. I think this part will be just fine.
The issue comes with the protagonist, an 18 year old high schooler who found his way in prison after hunting down all his bullies and those he thought didn't help him or betrayed him, and gun them down. The opening chapter is dedicated to this shooting, and it only ends after an officer shoots him in his side, which knocks him down and out, with the pain rendering him unconscious.
So yeah, a teenaged school shooter, how much more sympathetic can ya get! Seriously though, do you think this would make a good main character, given the setting?