Nobody: Eternal Scars

Arx11Comic

Arx11Comic

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Epilogue
Everyone knew it wouldn't be long until the dimensions went up in war. They had to,and now many innocent people were called to take part in the war. Nobody wanted to. They were all in the room. The room that was empty, not very big, and cold. Everyone shivered. People were muttering, reassuring themselves. But they knew they might die very soon.
The entrance to the room opened, and a man wearing armor and a red cape stood, without his helmet. The blow of cold didn't seem to affect him. Everyone went quiet. So quiet you could hear a pin drop. The man lelet everyone soak in the silence. Then he said for everyone in the room to hear, "We are at war with 2 dimensions." His voice was deep and rough. A quiet murmur ran through the room. "We found the man who caused all of this--" other knights ran in, and started handing people photos. "--and have his identity."
The picture showed a man with red shoes, blue jeans, green shirt and a sword on his back. He had black, long hair, and bright skin. "You will go into battle 2 days from now. To defend our dimension. We know where they will enter."
A person raised their hand, timidly.
"B-but we have no weapons," they said. "How do we fight?"
"Some of you have magical abilities, and others will get weapons."
There was sience for a moment.
"What is the curplits name?" One asked.
"Storm Sterling."
Chapter 1: Gathering
A blue light flashed, and Storm Sterling ran out, holding his sword. He quickly got up, pressed a button on his sword, and the light dissapeared. He looked around him at the new scenery. It wasn't pretty, and it was bitterly cold. Storm walked for a bit, then noticed all the gunpowder in the sky. Storm put the sword on his back.
"Something's happening," Storm said, as his sword glowed blue.
 
OOC
Here is how this will work.
You will fill out a character form, posted below.
NAME
What's your character(s) name?
LOOKS
What do they look like?
PERSONALITY
Tell us how your character acts.
DIMENSION
You are in either Di-1, 2, or 3. You choose.
STRENGTHS,POWERS AND WEAKNESSES
You know.
BACKSTORY
Tell us the BACKSTORY of your character.
QUESTIONS(Optional)
Have questions?

I'm making a Discord for this, just to be a little more organized. I will release the link when its ready.
 
1. Nobody has an idea of what your RP is supposed to be.
2. You started off with an Epilogue? You meant to say Prologue?

You should probably look for other RPs for example before creating one. If you do so, you will find that your posts above lacks the major elements that defines an unique RP, which is probably why no one was inclined to join this RP as of date. There has to be background, and parameters set before it can even begin. A GM cannot treat other people as if they knew exactly what he/she was thinking at the time, and if you choose to make a RP, that includes you. From the direction that the 'Epilogue' and First Chapter is heading, it seems as though it is more fit for a solo writer than a team. If interested writers can not make out what the RP is, there is no way they can write about it, no matter how the GM imagines the RP to turn out.

TL;DR
The content you have posted is premature, and lacks components that is necessary in a good RP. I suggest reviewing and modifying it otherwise this RP would eventually become a dead, half baked idea.
 
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