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    Died on the Vine

    "Good." He said. He got up from his chair, and walked over to the door. He stopped there, then said to Sarah "If anyone calls, have them leave a message." He picked up his brief case, and gathered his things. "I'll try to be back before 10:00." He opened the door. "Goodbye" He said, pausing in...
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    Died on the Vine

    "It will be plenty, Miss Guardia" Leidan said. He needed the money, and from past experiences knew to accept what was offered at first, rather than trying to ask for a high price. Even if she could pay more than fifty dollars, that didn't mean she would want to pay more. Besides, she would...
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    Died on the Vine

    "Don't worry Ms. Guardia, I assure you all this will remain confidential." He replied with an air of formality. "Can you give me the time at which this happened? And the location?" He asked, taking notes as he spoke.
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    Died on the Vine

    "No ma'am." He said, looking at her. "I just need you to tell me the facts. If you don't help me, then I will be unable to help you. Let's start simple, who is your daughter?" Leidan waited intently for a response.
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    Died on the Vine

    The office was cluttered, photographs and long overdue paperwork covered the desk. Leidan cleared away some of the clutter, knocking a pile of photos off of it. "No, I've not heard the name. What has she been accused of?"He asked, leaning forward in his chair. He pulled out a notebook, and...
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    Characters : Creation

    "Wish list" for Leidan: Ford Model A Smith & Wesson .357 Magnum revolver Rotary Dial Phone Basic Household Amenities Small three story building, his office on the bottom (With Sarah's secretary desk, sort of a two room thing.) his room on the second floor, and Sarah's on the top. Fedora and...
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    Characters : Creation

    Pillars of sanity (2 you said?): Love Physical laws and the reality of scientific knowledge Source of stability: Sarah Sarah is loving, caring, and comforting, and just being near her makes him feel better Jacob Jacob's whimsical view on the world helps Leidan take his mind off of the terror...
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    Characters : Creation

    Nevermind about Interrogation, It's good as it is.
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    Characters : Creation

    Is there a 'marksmanship' skill? I think the only changes I might make are to give him several points in marksmanship, and maybe a few more in interrogation. Other than that, those skills reflect perfectly the kind of character I'd want him to be.
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    Characters : Creation

    Okay, just don't add the "--- J. P. Laiden, in an interview for the New York Times" and it'll be fine. I just want him to catch a glimpse of the supernatural, not something so detailed he knows it's real. I intend for him to be constantly attempting to deny the fact that this stuff is real...
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    Characters : Creation

    Oh yes, I forgot: He is determined, driven by a sort of fiery vengeance, hatred almost, to find his parents murderer. About the case, here's what I would like: Keep the first bit, up until "I saw.." then replace it with this. "I saw.... It. Out of the corner of my eye I caught a glimpse of...
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    Characters : Creation

    Okay, here we go: Aspirations/Dreams: Leidan has always dreamed of becoming a pilot, even after he went through college. "I've always wanted to be a pilot. The thought of flying away from all the fears and troubles of life to somewhere far away has been a sort of dream of mine." ---J. P. Leidan...
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    Characters : Creation

    Sorry I missed a bit. Leidan's age is 35. Relationships: Sarah Smith: He and Sarah had been great friends ever since they met. He writes her letters every chance he gets. Sort of like his girlfriend. Jacob Holden: His best-friend, the two often write to each-other. They tend to joke around, and...
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    Characters : Creation

    Name: James Leidan, PI. Occupation: James Leidan is a Private Investigator, a sort of freelance detective. He has years of experience, and has helped solve many cases. Physical appearance: He often wears a fedora and trench coat, and a pair of dress shoes. He usually carries a briefcase around...
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