Demon's Broken Promise Destrier Seam - Ash Wolves, Second In Command.

[Lila Renn]

Appearance:

Name: Destrier Seam.


Age: 29


Gender: Male.


Race: Human

Role: Ash Wolves.

Rank: Second In Command.


Weapons: Cutlass, able to cut through nearly any material apart from reinforced Steel. He willingly severed his arm, just so he could replace it with a cybernetic one, giving him extreme strength on that arm, as well as able to use various different weapons and devices held within his arm. A rifle, able to shoot 300 Meters and under, strapped across his back.


Likes: Killing demons. (Obviously.) Making Jokes. His ‘pet’ and Training to become better.


Dislikes: Demons. Anybody who supports demons. Rude people.


Personality: When you first meet him, Destrier would come out as cold and uncaring. He hates most people and often distrusts them for the simplest of things. Destrier would have no problem threatening someone that is not somewhat close to him. When you get to know Destrier, he would be kind and he would be protective, rarely letting you out of his sight on a mission, even if he knows you are better than him.

Destrier's pet, Luna is a hunting wolf. He usually trains her to sniff out a demons scent, where they would be otherwise undetected. Destrier usually used it for combat though, using it to get a trick on his opponent. The wolf has extremely sharp teeth and fangs. It has a chip implanted in it, so Destrier can track its location at all times.


Bio: (Gonna leave this for now)




(Anything I should change for now?)

 

[happydeath]

Love the character so far. Though a few things are needed to be edited please.

First, you got the title of the thread setup right except that you need to put next to your character's name in the thread title what you are. In your case, it should be -- Destrier Seam - Ash Wolves Second in Command <-- or something along those lines.

Second, under rank. You need to add another section that is in the character application. It's the 'role' section. Your case your role would be Ash Wolves.

That's really all you need to edit, though the next things are more out of curiousity.

- You don't want to have any passive or active abilities? If not, that's completely cool with me too. Though if you do, this would mean your character would have some sort of demonic enhancement done on them. Like I said, if you don't want any that's cool too.

- Since this takes place in the future / sci-fi style. You can go with almost anything you want with weapons you know. Like you can have a sword that can vibrate to cut through steel or even a mechanized suit(Warframe) or even cybernetics if you want. Just suggestions there.

- You don't have anything extra you wish to add about your character? There is a section in the character application for 'extra' stuff that you can add if you wish. If not, that's cool too.

Aside from all that, you're all set.