Hmmm. Interesting piece in a stream of consciousness way. My doobie certainly helped, but if you would like a critique I can do so.
There are two things I can't avoid critiquing (as they aren't part of dialogue where phonetic transforms that could be explained by a "cholo's" propensity to...
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