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Thank you both so much!! I will take what you guys have said into account when I rewrite it ^-^

I know it's a lot to ask for, but if you could give away some of your precious time to read this for me and think of some feedback and comment it down below, it would mean a lot ^-^ A man is sitting in front of the class on his desk with his legs crossed over, he is addressing you and your...

This is just the description of the world right? If so: Sorry this took so long XD I had to do a lot research into the stuff I didn’t understand and read it a couple times. I think that you really are a creative person for coming up with something like this. This is constructive criticism. I...

Hiya! I wanna try give feedback, though I don't fully understand it so... I'm gonna read it a couple more times and maybe ask some questions to make sure I understand before giving feedback. Is that ok?