Notes- This is an excerpt from a longer horror/urban fantasy piece I'm working on, but I really think the monster encounter here needs work and I'm not sure what to do with it. The main character is a Selkie (a person who turns into a seal when they put their sealskin on) and the monster...
Okay I REALLY REALLY like this, you've set a really good tone for how your character is perceiving the events around him, and the description is vivid enough to get a clear picture without becoming florid. Very well done!
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