I heavily agree with you on this matter. As much of a mood killer as it might be to just plan things out (Specially with battles and such) if they involve both characters in the play, it completely keeps it from devolving into an immature endurance test of who can dodge more or hit harder in...
It's kinda hard to pinpoint, as even the most annoying characteristic can be worked out perfectly if you know how to weave you way with it! Say, having characters with negative traits doesn't mean they're bad; it might even make them more engaging, if that is done well! After all, no one is...
I'd say there were plenty, ranging from poor character development, lack of assertiveness and troubles with grammar, though the main one would be self-inserting to a certain extent. While I tried to avoid it like the plague, thanks to some beta writers I had on sites I posted my crappy...
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