Hm! You got the confusing feelings of puberty and the girl's emotional growth shown pretty well through this story! Like, the way it goes shorter and shorter as her growth progresses gives me a feel of a person finally finding their place in life! :D
Whoo-hoo...This is impressive! Even with the detailed struggles not over yet, the little motivation gains at the end make me appreciate this story a lot more! That, and Mr. Jeter really stood out, hahaha! XD
Hmm...I think this should be more developed. I mean, the whole thing so far feels like the beginning of a slice-of-life urban fantasy story or something, and I wanna see more of their world. How did the monsters come to be in more public view in the world of humans? Was it something like the...
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