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So, I have posted a story asking if you thought I was good at writing at or not. One person posted a comment that I thought was completely true. They said they think I am a very good writer I just tend to be very descriptive and then all of a sudden skip/ go right into something and don't...

Yes, I absolutely agree with the comments above. So, if this will help, which is probably just repeating what the others had said. When you are role playing, really focus on what you are trying to do. So something I focus on is the characters facial expressions, there hair, how there skin is...