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Before I actually post my story on here I'd like to share what it is actually about and some of the characters that are in it. Brief Sword Dance is a story about 5 races that rule over an island called Regulus. A thousand years ago the first leader of one of the races had cursed every race that...

The story it self sounds interesting but I noticed a habit that you have gained when someone is talking. When someone is talking you often go into conversation mode which is okay now and again but only now and again. There is a little to no description where there are people talking. This is not...

You mind if I give out a bit of constructive criticism?