Rachel Rider
Smol Turtle Girl
I wrote this for school but I thought it was cool so I wrote it down. I dunno, critique 'n' stuff? Also, when my teacher said we were making poems I was like, "Hmm, should I make a happy poem or one that makes her think about extestensalism?"
Stuck inside
This box of mine
Never to be opened
Till the end of time.
I’m stuck in here.
Am I alone?
I see other people,
But in a box of their own.
These things I see,
The things I sense.
No one will feel,
Kept in a fence.
Nor single thought,
Nor single sight.
No one can see
That is my plight.
Is that the case
For everyone?
If that is the truth,
There’s no other one.
What is that for me
Is this for you
We don’t even know
What is really true.
We know only ourselves,
We cannot reach
To other people,
Beyond the breach.
In this boxed up world
Language, can it show
Things that only you,
or I can know?
It cannot,
Nothing can tell
Things that only exist
Inside this box I dwell.
It's not that good but ya know. Don't judge. ;-;
Stuck inside
This box of mine
Never to be opened
Till the end of time.
I’m stuck in here.
Am I alone?
I see other people,
But in a box of their own.
These things I see,
The things I sense.
No one will feel,
Kept in a fence.
Nor single thought,
Nor single sight.
No one can see
That is my plight.
Is that the case
For everyone?
If that is the truth,
There’s no other one.
What is that for me
Is this for you
We don’t even know
What is really true.
We know only ourselves,
We cannot reach
To other people,
Beyond the breach.
In this boxed up world
Language, can it show
Things that only you,
or I can know?
It cannot,
Nothing can tell
Things that only exist
Inside this box I dwell.
It's not that good but ya know. Don't judge. ;-;
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