Demon's Broken Promise Shula (Zahra Nur)/Black Rose/Guard-Operative

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Name: Shula (Zahra Nur)

Age: 2530

Gender: Female

Race: Demon (Fire Demon)

Clan: Black Rose

Rank: Operative/Guard/ TBD

Weapon: Obsidian Chain

Passive Abilities:
  • Enhanced Speed: She can run up to bursts of 60 MPH. Her average speed is 30 MPH. Though she can control this and it has not gone past 60.
  • Increased Agility: Her training has trained her to be as agile as the fire she wields.
  • Night Vision: Her yellow eyes can become silted, to adjust in dark environments.
  • Heat Resistance: She can stand temperatures up to 100 degrees Celsius before it makes her sweat and can have her hand in an orange flame (about 900 degrees Celsius) for about a minute. Because of this though, cold does affect her more easily.
Active Abilities:
  • Fire Manipulation: Can control, and make her own fire if she wishes. Most fires around her are automatically drawn to her or react to her emotions. Though this is difficult for her to do in cold/wet (including tropical humid areas) environments.
  • Corporeal Form: She can turn her whole body into smoke or blend into the smoke of a fire, but only for a few seconds. If she does it too much (5 times in the span of thirty minutes), she can lose the stability of her main form.
  • Teleportation: She can teleport only to places she has seen and knows the layout of. This also wears her out, and her max carry is three other beings.
  • Purple Fire: A healing fire that can heal wounds and burn away most poisons or toxins in a body. This takes much concentration and the process of using the fire can take up to 3 days at the least. Afterward, she will be unable to control her abilities for however long she healed (so heal for 3 days, out of control of her abilities, active and passive for 3 days, so something around her might catch on fire though she did not will it to or she will lose her speed).

Weaknesses:
  • Strength: She is not that strong for a demon. She is stronger than a human, but she can barely lift a car above her head.
  • Drowning: She can swim and get wet, but if she intakes too much water she will drown. For example, the average human can hold up to ½ a cup of water in their lungs when fully submerged in water, she can only hold one fourth.
  • Cold: While not fatal, it is harder to call upon her powers, or active abilities, when her body is natural warming itself in a cold environment.
  • Heights: They are not fatal, but she has a rehabilitating fear. She will freeze for a good 30 seconds when faced with a height higher than a three-story building.

Likes:
  • The color GREEN
  • Sparing
  • Dancing
  • Flowers, but red roses are her favorite.
  • Pranks

Dislikes:
  • Being called weak
  • Heights
  • Bullies
  • Intimacy
  • Water/Ice/Cold

Personality: Witty, Resilient, Passionate, Mischievous, Guarded, Competitive, Stubborn, Spiteful. Shula was taught that she was to protect the leaders from any threat. So, because anything could be a threat, even a well-meaning friend, she had to keep her distance. Distance made a better vantage point and gave her space to move in a blink if need be. But just because she keeps her distance and doesn’t trust people, doesn’t mean she can’t have fun with them. In fact, she found the best way to train her stealth is by pulling pranks. But she does take her job seriously. A fire is a light, revealing the truth that cannot long be hidden. She hopes that one day, it can reveal the truth about her.

Bio: After the attack on Haven by the Beast that took so many lives, Shula was found among blood and ashes, her face scarred, and her form almost fading the wind as her tiny hands clutched an obsidian chain. She was only a fire demon child and should have burned or become ashes like the others. For some reason, her form held together. Though it held together, it did not fully repair itself. She woke up, not knowing who or where she was. She knew things such as how fire demons were born (they rose from the ashes of the impregnated demon or human), and that her obsidian chain could hold up to 1300 degrees Celsius of heat and that green was the best color ever. She knew those things but did not even know her name. Worst of all, no one came to claim her. Even after the Founders (may their sacrifice always be remembered) won, no one claimed her. No one knew who she was. So, she was named Shula and put into military training.

Quickly, it was realized that she was weak. She was not as strong as the others and her punches could not even send an imp, maybe even a human, flying. She lost some (a LOT) of fights, but if her opponents went to bed, and woke up with soaked bedsheets, or all their clothes were gone, or their food was too spicy all day, no one figured it would be weak little her. Until General Hikmah caught her. How she still does not know. But he caught her and decided to put her in a different training group. He said her playful nature, speed, and mind would be better used to protect those who ruled. Protect those who saved them.

A part of Shula wonders if no one wanted her because she was weak, a disappointment. But another hopes that maybe, no one came because they couldn’t. Because they were heroes who sacrificed everything for the people under their care. If that was why no one had come, she would honor their memory by protecting future heroes. And even if her parents really did just leave her because she was weak, she would show them that she was fast and smart enough to protect the strong. So, Shula accepted.

General Hikmah put her in his Special Operations Unit, P.A.I. (Protection and Investigations). P.A.I.’s oath was to protect the legacy and sacrifice of the founders and investigate any threat to the Black Rose Clan. Honestly, Shula prefers the investigation part. Searching and observing for the truth made her feel, not weak. And just like how she knew green was the best color, she knew fire could be the light that revealed the truth that could not be long hidden. Still, she trained to investigate and protect the leaders of the Black Rose Clan.

She had to push, work around, or burn her way through obstacle courses, training, sparring matches, and classes. But she made it and became a full-fledge operative of the Special Operations Unit, P.A.I. (and celebrated by presenting General Hikmah with the car he wanted, in his office, his desk on top of the vehicle, and none of the cameras caught her). General Shalom assigned her to guard the Leader and Second-in-Command. As her assignment, she is to follow and obey the commands of both leaders, reporting their whereabouts to General Hikmah, unless out on an investigation sanctioned by the leaders themselves and General Shalom. And of course, have a bit of fun as well.

Extra:
  • Her brand is between her shoulder blades on her back.
  • Her scar was from the attack.
    • It forces even her natural smile to look like a smirk.
  • Wears her chain as a belt, always.
  • She would rather go for a swim than fly.
    • Yes, she knows full well that she has a high risk of drowning, still would rather do that than fly.
  • Her choker is actually a communication device that allows her to report to General Hikmah at a moment's notice.
    • She disables the tracking feature daily.
  • Dancing and Roses are the only things she remembers from before.

Theme Song: On My Own- Alan Walker
 
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Other then Controlling Fire being an active, it looks all good.
It’s nothing too major, it looks like you got a spare slot for another active and everything looks pretty balanced.
 
@GreenPhoenix3
Hello there!
While everything so far does look in order, I do have a few things I must bring up in order to fix them. Where possible, I will add suggestions to help out.

Fire Manipulation: Can control, and make her own fire if she wishes. Most fires around her are automatically drawn to her or react to her emotions.

You have this in the passives section of your character sheet. This is not considered a passive, this is an active ability since it is something your character is able to quite literally control and summon however they wish. As Sanity has stated, it is an active ability and due to demon characters having four slots for actives, you can add it there and put a weakness for said ability.


Purple Fire: A healing fire that can heal wounds and burn away most poisons or toxins in a body. This takes much concentration and the process of using the fire can take up to 3 days at the least. Afterward, she will be unable to produce much magic or control her abilities for however long she healed (so heal for 3 days, out of control for 3 days).

This is more out of curiousity since you state the fire is a type of 'healing' fire rather than harmful. What exactly do you mean when you state that it would be out of control? Since it is healing, what kind of damage would an out of control healing type ability cause?
 
@GreenPhoenix3
You have this in the passives section of your character sheet.

What exactly do you mean when you state that it would be out of control? Since it is healing, what kind of damage would an out of control healing type ability cause?

@happydeath
The change has been made.

I meant her actual abilities not the healing abilities. Making and using Purple Fire is kinda like adding an accelerant to a fire. It will make the fire go out of control and make it more destructive or explode, leaving behind burned out remains, or in this case a burned out Shula.

Thank you for your feedback!!!
 
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