Thats not mean at all, it's exactly what my creative writing proffesor said. I'm not really a fan of this poem but I'm knew to the site and I wanted to get something posted, thanks for the comment I always appreciate feedback.
Watching the wind encase each of her loose wavy strands was intoxicating.
I stare into a pair of empty cerulean eyes, like the shadow cast over my desk from the dull white pills I force myself to indulge in for the sake of those “who love me”.
In an empty glass casket that is decorated with...
What's up everyone, I'm a 19 year old girl struggling to get though college, I study bio medical science and my goal is to become a physical therapist for amputees. Ive always loved writing but my spelling is weak and I'm terrible at editing my own work so for that reason I've never been much...
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