Beyond the World We See (OOC) (Semi-Realistic)

Draco Red said:
"unleash the Kajiu"
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Full name: Chojin Jackson

Title: Kajiu King

Monikers: N/A

Birthday: April 28th

Age: 21

Gender: Male:

Occupation: fisher/hunter

Social class: upper middle class

Orientation: N/A
Physical information

Apparent Age: 21

Voice: remain silent but sometimes uses a voice modulator

Overall Attractiveness: hides his face behind a helmet because he's too afraid to View the outside world

Eye color: N/A but some think blue

Glasses or Contacts: N/A but some thinks Contacts

Hair Color: N/A

Hairstyle: N/A

Weight: 160 lbs.

Height: 6"2"

Skin tone: N/A

Dominant Feature: how he always makes a emotion by the eyes on his helmet
Persona
Favorites:

Color: Fire Red

Music: 80's pop

Literature: Edgar Allan Poe

Expression: "Godzilla couldn't even match me the Kajiu King.

Curse: "baku"

Mode of transportation: Motorcycle

Habits:

Drinking: Never

Smoking: Never

Mannerisms: snapping to his favorite 80's song

Optimist or Pessimist: Optimist

Introvert or Extrovert: Extrovert

Logical or Emotional: Emotional

Business or Pleasure: Business

Confident? Yea he is confident in himself

Animal Lover? He Chojin loves fish and dogs

Greatest strength: to use any Gadget to his disposal

Greatest weakness: he is claustrophobic and cant stay in small places

Priority: to take fish theme restaurant worldwide

Philosophy: N/A

Pressure point: can't stay in small spaces
Is this obvious? No except when he has to fish in small spaces

Most comfortable when: he is fishing

Least comfortable when: he is in small spaces amd feels like he's going to be bury

Religion: Christian
Back ground

Familial Relations:

Mother: Natalie Jackson
Relations: Chojin keeps up with his MoM from time to time

Father: John
Relations: Chojin vists his Dad every year for their annual fish competition

Brother: Joe Jackson
Relations: Chojin helps his little Bro with life problems till he move but occasionally he pick ham up for fishing lessons

Sister: Maggie Jackson (decease)
Relations: Maggie was Jackson older sister till she had a heart attack

Hometown: Sakana City

Type of childhood: raise by his Mom and Dad as a Christian and goes to church every Sunday with them till he got older and moved in which he goes to his own church now.

First memory: Fishing with his Dad and his Mom cheering him up while his older sister and little brother both kept trying to keep him from falling.

Education: in his second year of college and has his own fish theme restaurant

Brief biography: Chojin as and always been a good child and student. Chojin has been loyal to his parents and always been by his brother and sister side.
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Unfortunately, I think I'll have to turn this one down. I'm not quite sure if this character concept is really grasping the point of Beyond the World We See. If you'd like to re-apply with something else, I'd be more than happy to check it out.
 
Er, I don't know if you're quite getting it. Going from the character's name, basic appearance, etc, he reminds me of something out of the Power Rangers or some sort of anime in terms of over-the-top traits. This RP is supposed to be more low-key and realistic, like, the characters are supposed to be the kind of people you could find walking down the street in real life.
 
I think there'd still be a few more things to change. Maybe try checking out some of the other sheets posted, and perhaps re-read the rules and description to get a better feel for the setting.
 
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Name: Rollui King
Title: Chess King
Monikers: King
Birthday: March 17th
Age: 17
Gender: Male
Occupation: Chess Player/ High School Student
Social-Class: average
Orientation: N/A

Physical information

Apparent Age: 17
Voice: Stern and tough
Overall attractiveness: he is attractive when he's serious
Eye Color: Brown
Glasses or contacts: Glasses
Hair Color: pinkish red
Hairstyle: spiky
Weight: 170 lbs
Height: 5"6"
Skin Tone: tan skin
Dominant feature: is his spiky hair and glasses

Persona

Favorites:
Color: purple
Music: Godzilla theme
Literature: history of chess and World Language
Expression: "Never underestimate your opponent that is your one mistake"
Curse: "Crap"
Mode of transportation: bike
Radio station: the bluefront Morning Show

Habits:
Drinking: Never
Smoking: Never
Mannerism: starts with blank uncontrollably

Optimist or Pessimist? Pessimist
Introvert or Extrovert? Extrovert
Logical or Emotional? Logical
Business or Pleasure? Pleasure
Confident? Sometimes but only under pressure
Animal lover? Yes Rollui has a pet Dog
Greatest Strength: his intelligence
Greatest Weakness: his physical test
Priority: to make it to the national championship for chess
Philosophy: never be by yourself always have one person by your side to take the blame

Pressure point: when he has to take his physical test
Most comfortable when: he's playing chess or reading a book
Least comfortable when: in a room with a girl during a awkward conversation
Religion: Christian

Background

Familial Relations:
Mother: Elena King
Relation with: Rollui is Elena only child and loves him deeply and if anything would happen to him. She would feel like its her fault
Father: Jeffrey King
Relation with: spend time bonding with Rollui as a father-son relationship
Hometown: Shogi
Type of childhood: Rollui live a happy life as an only child but sometimes got lonely being by himself.
First memory: playing chess against a dad while his mom cheer them both on
Education: Rollui has a great education and is earning a scholarship for Math and World Language and on the weekends teaches students how to play chess
Brief biography: Rollui has always live the good life as a only child but when he turn 11 his family moved to Shogi City and since that day Roll has live his life happly with his new friends and girlfriend
 
"You aren't worth my time. Get out."

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Full Name: Anthony 'Tony' Westbrooke

Birthdate: November 11th, 1990

Age: 26 going on 27

Gender: Male

Occupation: Works from home selling hydroponically grown medicine

Social Class: Fairly well off, middle class to upper-middle class

Orientation: Straight enough. But not strictly so.

---Physical Information---

Apparent Age: Same as his actual age

Voice: Breathy and deep, but it tends to rapidly get higher when he becomes upset

Overall Attractiveness: A solid 8.5 out of 10 if he must say so. And he does.

Eye Color: Bright orangish hazel

Glasses or Contacts: None

Hair Color: Golden blonde

Hairstyle: Long and wavy, almost always tied back into a lopsidaisy ponytail

Weight: 188 pounds

Height: 6'4"

Skin Tone: Pale, with a great complexion

Dominant Feature: His piercing eyes, and the three moles on his left ear

---Persona---

Favorites---
Color: Gold
Music: Bass heavy existential rap about drug use
Literature: Horror classics, both new and old, especially Stephen King
Expression: "You're a pretty useless person, aren't you?"
Curse: "Shit."
Mode of Transportation: Walking or being driven around

Habits: Reading, watching movies, studying, and smoking
Drinking: Almost only socially
Smoking: All day every day
Mannerisms: Blunt, arrogant, elitist, and constantly curious

Optimist or Pessimist? Pessimist

Introvert or Extrovert? Introvert

Logical or Emotional? Emotional

Business or Pleasure? Pleasure

Confident? Too much of it

Animal Lover? Cats are cool

Greatest Strength: A never-ending desire to learn more about people and what makes them tick

Greatest Weakness: His ego sometimes causes him to overlook key details

Priority: Making sure he has enough money to live off of long after his parents die.

Philosophy: Nihilism


Pressure Point: The scandal that caused him to move to Missouri.
Is this obvious? Oh hell yes it is.

Most comfortable when: Getting his monthly check from the folks and smoking the dankest dank.

Least comfortable when: Talking to people who might be able to see past his arrogance, and notice there isn't much of a person underneath...

Religion: None what so ever


Background


Familial Relations---
Mother: Amanda Westbrooke Luchere (remarried)
Father: Michael Westbrooke (deceased)
Brother(s): None
Sister(s): Lindsay Westbrooke (older, married, kept her last name) / Morgan Luchere (younger half sister, still in high school)
Spouse: None

Hometown: Clearlake, CA

Type of childhood: Pretty good overall, minus a few hiccups.

First Memory: His first cats funeral. The first of many to come...

Education: Bachelor's Degree in Criminal Law with a minor is Plant Biology

Brief biography: Tony has never been a kind boy or man. From a young age, he learned how to lie about a lot of things. How the other boys he grew up with got hurt during sleepovers. What happened to the family pet this time. Why he was out so late and why he smelled like a moldy skunk when he came home. Lying is almost a second nature, and one he grew to love. Hence why it felt so natural to pursue a career as a defense lawyer, defending the scum of the Earth so that they could get away with their crimes. So he went to college for such a field, and it was there he discovered his second love:

Cannabis.

The young Westbrooke fell for the plant pretty hard, but it never got in the way of his studies. No, the other thing to ever do that was a certain woman, one who led to a scandal for his family. One he was taken to court for. One that forced him to leave his school of choice early. One that caused his mother to spend a fair bit of his step-father's savings for a settlement, and to move him as far away from the source of the embarrassment as they could afford. He was his Mother's darling boy, after all. Tony could do no wrong.

So he was bought a condominium in Bluefort. Given a nice amount of change to sit on for HOA and mortgage payments for years to come. All because his trusting mom believed he could truly do no wrong, and he was innocent of what he'd been accused. When honestly, nothing could have been further from the truth.
 
CaerBear said:
"You aren't worth my time. Get out."

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Full Name: Anthony 'Tony' Westbrooke

Birthdate: November 11th, 1990

Age: 26 going on 27

Gender: Male

Occupation: Works from home selling hydroponically grown medicine

Social Class: Fairly well off, middle class to upper-middle class

Orientation: Straight enough. But not strictly so.

---Physical Information---

Apparent Age: Same as his actual age

Voice: Breathy and deep, but it tends to rapidly get higher when he becomes upset

Overall Attractiveness: A solid 8.5 out of 10 if he must say so. And he does.

Eye Color: Bright orangish hazel

Glasses or Contacts: None

Hair Color: Golden blonde

Hairstyle: Long and wavy, almost always tied back into a lopsidaisy ponytail

Weight: 188 pounds

Height: 6'4"

Skin Tone: Pale, with a great complexion

Dominant Feature: His piercing eyes, and the three moles on his left ear

---Persona---

Favorites---
Color: Gold
Music: Bass heavy existential rap about drug use
Literature: Horror classics, both new and old, especially Stephen King
Expression: "You're a pretty useless person, aren't you?"
Curse: "Shit."
Mode of Transportation: Walking or being driven around

Habits: Reading, watching movies, studying, and smoking
Drinking: Almost only socially
Smoking: All day every day
Mannerisms: Blunt, arrogant, elitist, and constantly curious

Optimist or Pessimist? Pessimist

Introvert or Extrovert? Introvert

Logical or Emotional? Emotional

Business or Pleasure? Pleasure

Confident? Too much of it

Animal Lover? Cats are cool

Greatest Strength: A never-ending desire to learn more about people and what makes them tick

Greatest Weakness: His ego sometimes causes him to overlook key details

Priority: Making sure he has enough money to live off of long after his parents die.

Philosophy: Nihilism


Pressure Point: The scandal that caused him to move to Missouri.
Is this obvious? Oh hell yes it is.

Most comfortable when: Getting his monthly check from the folks and smoking the dankest dank.

Least comfortable when: Talking to people who might be able to see past his arrogance, and notice there isn't much of a person underneath...

Religion: None what so ever


Background


Familial Relations---
Mother: Amanda Westbrooke Luchere (remarried)
Father: Michael Westbrooke (deceased)
Brother(s): None
Sister(s): Lindsay Westbrooke (older, married, kept her last name) / Morgan Luchere (younger half sister, still in high school)
Spouse: None

Hometown: Clearlake, CA

Type of childhood: Pretty good overall, minus a few hiccups.

First Memory: His first cats funeral. The first of many to come...

Education: Bachelor's Degree in Criminal Law with a minor is Plant Biology

Brief biography: Tony has never been a kind boy or man. From a young age, he learned how to lie about a lot of things. How the other boys he grew up with got hurt during sleepovers. What happened to the family pet this time. Why he was out so late and why he smelled like a moldy skunk when he came home. Lying is almost a second nature, and one he grew to love. Hence why it felt so natural to pursue a career as a defense lawyer, defending the scum of the Earth so that they could get away with their crimes. So he went to college for such a field, and it was there he discovered his second love:

Cannabis.

The young Westbrooke fell for the plant pretty hard, but it never got in the way of his studies. No, the other thing to ever do that was a certain woman, one who led to a scandal for his family. One he was taken to court for. One that forced him to leave his school of choice early. One that caused his mother to spend a fair bit of his step-father's savings for a settlement, and to move him as far away from the source of the embarrassment as they could afford. He was his Mother's darling boy, after all. Tony could do no wrong.

So he was bought a condominium in Bluefort. Given a nice amount of change to sit on for HOA and mortgage payments for years to come. All because his trusting mom believed he could truly do no wrong, and he was innocent of what he'd been accused. When honestly, nothing could have been further from the truth.
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"I'm sorry, who are you?"

General Information

Full Name: Elyza Caldwell

Title: Much prefers "Madame Caldwell".

Monikers: Caldwell, Madame, Bitch, to name a few.

Birthdate: May 5th, 1988

Age: 28

Gender: A woman, through and through.

Occupation: Manages a vaguely successful startup company in commercial and personal renovation.

Social Class: She would insist to you she's upper class.

Orientation: Heterosexual

Physical Information

Apparent Age: 28

Voice: Delicate, yet haughty. Faultless.

Overall Attractiveness: Absolutely lovely.

Eye Color: Stunning emerald green.

Glasses or Contacts: None

Hair Color: Auburn

Hairstyle: Long. Flowing. Straight and flawless.

Weight: 138 lbs.

Height: 5'5".

Skin Tone: Fair and untouched.

Dominant Feature: That piercing, judgmental gaze.

Persona

Favorites:
Color: Crimson
Music: 20th Century Classical and Late Romantic
Literature: Only the finest by Machiavelli. (Don't ask her to pronounce that, though.)
Expression: "You must not know who you're speaking to."
Curse: Cunt
Mode of Transportation: Would never be caught driving herself anywhere, and would never be caught on public transport. Would rather walk or be driven.

Habits:
Drinking: Wine is one of the finer things of life. Whiskey is even better. Who knows the meaning of excess, anyway?
Smoking: Disgusting. Not even once.
Mannerisms: Elitist may be an understatement. Can't stand wasting her time with someone who doesn't deserve it.

Optimist or Pessimist?
She can do absolutely anything.

Introvert or Extrovert?
Extrovert.

Logical or Emotional?
Logical.

Business or Pleasure?
Perhaps a bit indulgent.

Confident?
Damn right.

Animal Lover?
Too much noise.

Greatest Strength:
Quite charismatic and persuasive.

Greatest Weakness:
Her ego is large and in charge.

Priority:
Money. Liquor. Luxury. A slave may be out of the question.

Philosophy:
Hedonism all the way.

Pressure Point:
She has to evade speaking of any of her family history.

Is this obvious?
She's a compulsive liar. It's only obvious if you catch her out on that.

Most comfortable when
Shitfaced, and/or around those whom she believes are "below" her.

Least comfortable when
Discussing family ties. Talking with law officials.

Religion:
Protestant


Background


Familial Relations:
Mother: Marjorie Caldwell (deceased)
Father: Joseph Caldwell
Spouse: Jake Reitz (divorced in 2009, current status unknown)

Hometown: Memphis, Tennessee

Type of childhood: Raised like a princess... For better or for worse.

First Memory: The last time Mom left the house.

Education: Bachelor's degree in business management.

Brief biography: Many kids called Elyza Caldwell spoiled as she grew up in Memphis, and they would have been right. She had very little to struggle with, being given just about everything to her on a plate. Of course the other kids were jealous. She was a princess. Her mother and father loved her so, and she got all the attention to herself as an only child. Granted, her mom had to leave on a business trip for one day and she never came back, but that just meant Dad would put all of his attention towards Elyza. Dad may have been a very busy man, but he knew where his priorities were.

Elyza's studies at University did not stop her from living at home. Why would she move anywhere else if she didn't have to? She had everything she needed at home, especially attention, luxury, and booze. Life was relatively non-problematic. But, soon, her Dad would start acting odd. He soon stopped her from leaving the house at night, and eventually stopped her from leaving the house in general. Relationships got tense in the house, and soon, her father would hand her a suitcase with her belongings, and show her the door. Elyza did not take too well to this, and she still doesn't. But, regardless, she ended up in Bluefort. She didn't know why she was in Bluefort. It seemed totally out of the way, and Elyza hardly even knew it existed. But this was where she would be, and she had to make do with it.
 
TheZanta said:
"I'm sorry, who are you?"

General Information

Full Name: Elyza Caldwell

Title: Much prefers "Madame Caldwell".

Monikers: Caldwell, Madame, Bitch, to name a few.

Birthdate: May 5th, 1988

Age: 28

Gender: A woman, through and through.

Occupation: Manages a vaguely successful startup company in commercial and personal renovation.

Social Class: She would insist to you she's upper class.

Orientation: Heterosexual

Physical Information

Apparent Age: 28

Voice: Delicate, yet haughty. Faultless.

Overall Attractiveness: Absolutely lovely.

Eye Color: Stunning emerald green.

Glasses or Contacts: None

Hair Color: Auburn

Hairstyle: Long. Flowing. Straight and flawless.

Weight: 138 lbs.

Height: 5'5".

Skin Tone: Fair and untouched.

Dominant Feature: That piercing, judgmental gaze.

Persona

Favorites:
Color: Crimson
Music: 20th Century Classical and Late Romantic
Literature: Only the finest by Machiavelli. (Don't ask her to pronounce that, though.)
Expression: "You must not know who you're speaking to."
Curse: Cunt
Mode of Transportation: Would never be caught driving herself anywhere, and would never be caught on public transport. Would rather walk or be driven.

Habits:
Drinking: Wine is one of the finer things of life. Whiskey is even better. Who knows the meaning of excess, anyway?
Smoking: Disgusting. Not even once.
Mannerisms: Elitist may be an understatement. Can't stand wasting her time with someone who doesn't deserve it.

Optimist or Pessimist?
She can do absolutely anything.

Introvert or Extrovert?
Extrovert.

Logical or Emotional?
Logical.

Business or Pleasure?
Perhaps a bit indulgent.

Confident?
Damn right.

Animal Lover?
Too much noise.

Greatest Strength:
Quite charismatic and persuasive.

Greatest Weakness:
Her ego is large and in charge.

Priority:
Money. Liquor. Luxury. A slave may be out of the question.

Philosophy:
Hedonism all the way.

Pressure Point:
She has to evade speaking of any of her family history.

Is this obvious?
She's a compulsive liar. It's only obvious if you catch her out on that.

Most comfortable when
Shitfaced, and/or around those whom she believes are "below" her.

Least comfortable when
Discussing family ties. Talking with law officials.

Religion:
Protestant


Background


Familial Relations:
Mother: Marjorie Caldwell (deceased)
Father: Joseph Caldwell
Spouse: Jake Reitz (divorced in 2009, current status unknown)

Hometown: Memphis, Tennessee

Type of childhood: Raised like a princess... For better or for worse.

First Memory: The last time Mom left the house.

Education: Bachelor's degree in business management.

Brief biography: Many kids called Elyza Caldwell spoiled as she grew up in Memphis, and they would have been right. She had very little to struggle with, being given just about everything to her on a plate. Of course the other kids were jealous. She was a princess. Her mother and father loved her so, and she got all the attention to herself as an only child. Granted, her mom had to leave on a business trip for one day and she never came back, but that just meant Dad would put all of his attention towards Elyza. Dad may have been a very busy man, but he knew where his priorities were.

Elyza's studies at University did not stop her from living at home. Why would she move anywhere else if she didn't have to? She had everything she needed at home, especially attention, luxury, and booze. Life was relatively non-problematic. But, soon, her Dad would start acting odd. He soon stopped her from leaving the house at night, and eventually stopped her from leaving the house in general. Relationships got tense in the house, and soon, her father would hand her a suitcase with her belongings, and show her the door. Elyza did not take too well to this, and she still doesn't. But, regardless, she ended up in Bluefort. She didn't know why she was in Bluefort. It seemed totally out of the way, and Elyza hardly even knew it existed. But this was where she would be, and she had to make do with it.
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