Hmmmm.
Some of you are forgetting a rule: "No one line posts. And keep two line posts to an absolute minimum. Aim for three lines or above. This is because it make the RP less stale, and people also enjoy longer posts much more than simple one or two liners. We aren't all expert writers, but if you're joining a forum, you gotta be better than one or two line(s) of dialogue or action."
I'm seeing a lot of basic one liner posts in the chapter. If you need an example of what I like in a post, Steely's was great. Obviously not everyone can shoot for something of that length, but don't keep all posts small and rather stale. Challenge yourself to make your posts as long as you think you can make them.