Ok, Time for the first round of CS reviews.
@Axl, Paelerian Issosus looks good. From what we discussed, I was under the impression that he'd be providing psychic observation support during missions when not deployed, so if you're planning on doing that, I'd suggest adding some Telepathic and/or Psyniscience abilities to the list. Also, you refer to the
Merciless Interdiction as the
Dauntless Interdiction several times. Once you address those issues you'll be good to go.
@ChelonianCommander, V6 is also looking good, however, I'm not sure how 'Expendable' is supposed to be a strength on a personal level. Is that how he views himself, therefore making him immune to concerns of self-preservation in the long term? Or is it supposed to be a setup for 'if my guy dies, I can re-roll another guy just like him'? If the former, please elaborate, if the latter, you'll get to re-roll what/whoever you want if your character gets killed and don't need an excuse for cut-and-paste copies at the moment. Address that and I'll accept your character.
Also: While I'm okay with the
Eye of the Machine tagging along, do keep in mind that the rest of the Inquisition is not going to trust them easily. The goals of the Inquisition and the Mechanicus can easily come into conflict: One organization wants to discover all forms of knowledge while the other seeks to deliberately keep some knowledge away from others. Also it's in the nature Heneria's agents to be stealthy and covert and having an escort not versed in such methods is going to pose a big security risk. None of this is bad, I'm just forewarning you for when people start looking at you funny.
Also, I have a channel set up on
@Nilum's discord server. I put a link on the first post and
one right here too. Just ping Nilum or any of the other managers and let them know you're there for Kill-Team Eschaton and they'll set you up with the proper permissions. You don't have to join if you don't want to, but it will be an easy and quick way to get in touch with me.