TheGreenerGrey
Self-proclaimed everything expert.
LaughterYus. I shall get to work later today. Once I get the rest of the stuff for the Odakkai done, as promised.
LaughterYus. I shall get to work later today. Once I get the rest of the stuff for the Odakkai done, as promised.
So, he wouldn't be a master of anything. I don't allow masters because A: The char would have to be hundreds of years old, and because this is a roleplay. Anything that has no room for growth isn't built for a roleplay He can be experienced, but definitely not one of the best acrobats in the Odakkai clan, especially since there are folk in the clans that are 2,000 years old and have been leaping and rolling for a much longer time.Acrobatics: Alathon is a master acrobat, capable of making jumps that even the most experienced Oddokai acrobats would blanch at with ease.
Bladed Staff Mastery: In order to survive the wild, Alathon has trained to use a bladed quaterstaff, with blades placed at either end of the staff. This staff doubles as both a weapon and fallbreaker, as he is capable of using it to save him from a bad fall or to leap through the air mid combat.
This also doesn't make as much sense for an Oddakai, they're slender, lithe creatures, actually the weakest of all the races. They wouldn't have immense strength as is described hereStrength: While it’s nothing to write home about, Alathon is ripped. He may not be able to knock over trees with a single punch, but to a regular elf, dhomharan or beast, he lashes with the force of a sack of bricks, bringing all but the toughest to the floor.
This also directly contradicts claims that he has some immense strength, so I'd probably go through the whole CS and just make sure you're remaining consistent.Thus, he is weak in constitution and unable to take very many hits.
I love the start, I'd just like a little bit more explanation for the 5 words you chose. It's great, just add more to it if you could!
You are so helpful
*whispers: WE NEED ANOTHER ALMIUN*
Yup! So the five words are an overview. The written personality paragraph section below it should go into detail. About each if the 5 words you chose, explaining why they're there, how those aspects of his personality developed, etc does that help?I am kind of confused as to what I need to add to the explanation of the 5 words? Could use some more info on what exactly you want to see.
:/ I can't even imagine why lolUhh...not likely. You'll see why.
Well, unforunately I do have to approve it, so... Don't make me hate it too muchConversely, you might think my bio is pretty cool, but I have my doubts.