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Short and simple. Grammar could use a bit of work though. In this case, it's "too", not "to".

I felt relieved when I saw that I was not the only person here. But they all had looks of distress on them, clearly in panic. I was smart enough to tell that nobody was meant to be here. And the amount of people was high. This wasn't your average kidnapping. What was going on here? I continue to...

I am doing the chapters into separate parts as I have been busy and can't get all of chapter 1 done tonight. I hope you enjoy it nonetheless.

It took a lot of force to open my eyes when I had awoke. But even when I did, I couldn't tell if they were truly open. All I could see was pure darkness around me, nothing but the color black. I tried to remember where I was, and how I got there. But then, my heart stopped. I couldn't remember...

A place where you can be happy A place where pain is numb A place with no sorrow A place where you are no longer numb That is Wonderland Many sweets, wildlife, and odd creatures All witnessed by the naked eye They all make me happy And no longer want to die That is Wonderland A tar like...

I haven't finished this just yet, but I am impressed of how much detail is into this. There are just a few things I would like to criticize. And don't worry, it's not in a mean way. I just want to show your mistakes. I am not sure if these are fixed at later episodes or not, but just in case, I...

The sound of a grandfather clock rings the air as the time of midnight strikes. DONG! DONG! DONG! The noise woke me up with a start. I then chuckle. The thing always made me jump. I guess I am just a light sleeper. I was a little thirsty, so I crept over to the sink wearily, and filled a cup up...

The perfect McJoke to go with my McHumour

XD....i hate you XD

How in the hell do you come up with this stuff! Even I have the brain of a McChicken when it comes to this humor!

XD

God, now it's making me laugh my butt off

I can't any more. It's to much to handle!

God! Its one those where feel bad for the man, but you can't help but make McJokes every time you meet him XD

If you have any suggestions or ideas of how to improve on my story-writing skills, please run them by me. I'm not picky with new ideas.

Chapter 1 Survival Game I wake up in a desolate, dark room. An empty chill fills the room, causing me to slightly shudder. Only the bed I was lying on and a desk was in its wake. My head is aching, causing me to grab it and groan slightly. My heart pounds heavily against my chest, as it...

First of all, poor principal. I do hope is alright now. Second of all, how in the world does a person even manage to hit almost ALL of the cars. And last...Principal McMuffin XD. Nuff said.