Rachel Rider
Smol Turtle Girl
The ED isn't a room, it's a cave, and it's also pretty large. That's what I meant about enviorment. Lore is really more from the thing about the eyes and isn't really a big problem. As for double posting, that's when someone posts right after someone responds to their post, like what you did with Kiki. It's a problem because that can sometimes make others lag behind and not be able to react.