Almighty.Person.Me
The Envious One
Ha. The Nugs seem somewhat comical, yet formidable. I could see them existing as one of the nations that exist very far from the capital where the Ruler of the new world has his capital. I haven't fleshed out the leader much yet, but I do know that physical strength or even logistics wouldn't really stop him from attempting to annihilate a country that doesn't conform. It would mostly be a matter of distance.
The concept of distance being preventative may be something I tie into teleportation magic. Bad guy here has no teleportation magic so he can't instantly move armies around. We were teleported to this planet via a portal from the Old World. There's something there, I just haven't tied it together yet.
Still, the Nugs could definitely exist. It may actually be very near to the place we start in the New World.
As for the Void Born there are a few things to address. I don't think the Ruler or Tyrant has been in control for thousands of years. If he had been, then his control on even the furthest nations would be nearly absolute. I'm thinking only maybe 10 years of being complete ruler so far. Preceded by maybe 100 or so years of taking over nations one-by-one.
Also, as for draining magic completely, I think we need to cover a little more of how magic works before we can either confirm or deny this as being a thing. I could see that being a powerful ability, which is cool, just want to make sure it's not too powerful since magic is extremely prominent in this world and with the heroes.
Aside from that, it sounds good so far.
The concept of distance being preventative may be something I tie into teleportation magic. Bad guy here has no teleportation magic so he can't instantly move armies around. We were teleported to this planet via a portal from the Old World. There's something there, I just haven't tied it together yet.
Still, the Nugs could definitely exist. It may actually be very near to the place we start in the New World.
As for the Void Born there are a few things to address. I don't think the Ruler or Tyrant has been in control for thousands of years. If he had been, then his control on even the furthest nations would be nearly absolute. I'm thinking only maybe 10 years of being complete ruler so far. Preceded by maybe 100 or so years of taking over nations one-by-one.
Also, as for draining magic completely, I think we need to cover a little more of how magic works before we can either confirm or deny this as being a thing. I could see that being a powerful ability, which is cool, just want to make sure it's not too powerful since magic is extremely prominent in this world and with the heroes.
Aside from that, it sounds good so far.