Maybe you and @The Speaker could do a roleplay set in the past? maybe some 2-3 years before the events of "The Meeting"? Just a suggestion
Hmmm... The power of mental fortitude is an excellent suggestion! I could make it like less than an hour for weak-willed or dimwitted people but several hours for powerful people (still covers Joe's issue since he actually read the rigged docs for several hours without resistance). As for his morality, as interesting the suggestion may be, I have already established that he distrusts anyone that is not the main five, thus will always take precautions, though I could find a way to integrate that.@Chaos Sphere
Next is your first character, Bluebird.
Your mind-control is a tad bit overpowered. I believe that the main characters that could be controlled either would have some resistance (being powered) or should be harder to control. I don't believe many people would like their character to be under the control or influence of some other writer. HOWEVER I still think It's a cool ability and I would love it if you could find some way to limit it, either through a creative writing change or a limit. One idea could be the maximum number of minions and that some people are mentally stronger than others, therefore taking up more "space". Another, better idea, in my opinion, could be the morality of BLuebird. He has respect for powerful people and therefore only uses disadvantaged people, thieves, or lowlives as slaves/minions. You decide but having a character that can mind-control most of the cast fairly easily is hard to write around. No offense here! I love the idea!
I hope I didn't misunderstand your character by the way, as it is a little hard for me to understand but that's okay.
Make an individual’s possible future come true in exchange for notable memories.Up next is @Dan
What do you mean with "Make an individual’s possible future come true in exchange for notable memories." Whose memories is this talking about? Yours or the victims? And is it random what sort of memories, maybe bigger changes take the most valuable memories? Just a thought.
The only hard thing about this character is the unpredictable of the Plot. How will you handle a situation where your character's ability predicts the future and that future does not occur? I think this is something you should do when writing and not put as a limit on your character unless you come up with a solution. It would make sense if what you see is fated to happen but if the plot and writers involved don't agree then we have an issue right?
That sounds similar to how the wishes worked for Atreyu in The Neverending StoryMake an individual’s possible future come true in exchange for notable memories.
In lay man’s terms: If the person wants one of their possible futures to become reality, then they would have to give up memories that mean the most to them. I apologise, I should've replaced 'notable' with 'important' to be more clear.
That’s the beauty of predictions, it’s possible for one of them to become true but does not mean it will. Whether the prediction comes true or not, is not the fault of my character’s doing. If it does not occur, then it does not occur. What do you mean by not putting it as a limit? I’m confused on that part. Are you talking about whether Aspen can change the plot…or? I’m genuinely confused by this last question.
His power works only through physical skin to skin contact. 1 minute touched would equal a year off of the victim's life, so the length of time it would take to kill someone would depend on how old the person was. he can heal all wounds short of loss of limbs/organs. It would not heal mental wounds. He can feel every bit of the wounds healing. most wounds would feel like a relief to heal but if it was a dislocated joint/limb that would hurt for him to heal.Next one up is @Draco Shadowdragon
Also, a very straightforward power not meant to insult you haha.
How long does it take to kill someone with this power? is it only applicable through physical touch? which limbs? All?
How exactly does it work? Does it need to be skin to skin or is it okay if you generally touch the person? Say a piece of clothing they're wearing.
How does healing the wounds thing work? Can you heal all wounds? even paranormal wounds? Can you accidentally kill someone using that power? Also, is it painful? Or could you go in the streets, brush against tens of hundreds of people and get your life energy back just like that?
She creates sound herself and can tune any sound that has been made except sounds made from other people. she can't fo example kill someone with their own heartbeat. She can tune sounds as high or low as she wants but the higher/lower the sound goes the more energy it takes to do so. so theoretically she could destroy several city blocks worth of windows but doing so would overexert her, not to mention that morally she would never do such a thing because she doesn't want to hurt innocent people. I will put a power cap on it to wear she can only use the extremely loud and high/low frequencies when she is in rage or extreme mourning. She can manipulate volume as well.Another character from @Draco Shadowdragon.
Does she create sound herself or does she need a source? You mention she can tune sounds, can she tune other sounds than the one she produces herself?
Can she for example break glass with this, like Black Canary? How limited are we talking here? High enough sounds can destroy entire city blocks full of windows and crush other's hearing. I will agree that this power isn't super powerful on some levels but on others, it could be.
I will agree that she could be able to make soundwaves like that of a volcano ish (think that sort of volume) but doing something like this could maybe only be released by rage or mourning? and that it is totally exhausting? What do you think?
Can she only manipulate frequency or volume too?
You mentioned she can mute sounds, does that mean she can mute people as well? Only the sound or the actual muscles in their throat?
Felix is Twice as strong and fast as a wolf but is less agile. Felix is very intelligent, observant and cunning. He has to eat twice as much food as a regular wolf.Last character for @Draco Shadowdragon
There's really nothing to say here other than Felix, the dog.
How strong is it compared to normal wolves? is it like a tiger? surely it needs a lot of food to sustain itself.
Does having twin souls have any actual significance like resistance to things or is It purely themeatical?